Despite that I enjoy more relaxed diction and phrasing in
contemporary reporting, as an editor I feel someone should have given this
sentence as second look:
On the reports that [Bradley Cooper and Irina Shayk] are expecting their first child, which came after Shayk killed it on the runway for Victoria's Secret Wednesday night.
Yes, I know what the writer meant, but still...
Or maybe it’s just me. I have been marking student writing nonstop for
the last week ...
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